寫得有點像台式英文
幾個重點: 1.by giving....那句並不是子句,只是片語而已
2.everything you've been expected from me 有誤,應改為:
everything you've been expecting from me 或是
everything you've expected from me

3.and 連接兩個對等名詞當然是可以的, 只不過裡面一個是用adj形容,另一個是用adj 子句形容而已...