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Originally posted by R.T.
Dear Amazon,
Glad to receive the order no.xxxxxxxxx that I am eagered waiting for.
Sorry to find the keep case of item "Akira" was break during the shipment.The disc were damaged and could not be played.
Please arrange re-shipment for replacement.
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，修正一下文法。有些地方使用自己的寫法重新改寫
( )代表寫不寫均可，/ 代表任取其一
原：that I am eagered waiting for
修正：(that) I've been keenly/eagerly waiting for
原：Sorry to find the keep case of item "Akira" was break during the shipment.The disc were damaged and could not be played.
修正：I'm sorry to find the tin case had scratched the disc surface so that the disc was severely damaged and cannot be played.