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作者dickiong
My name is 名子.

I was born on April 23,1988.

I live in Tainan County.

I have a easygoing personality and I'm very happy to be friend with everyone.

a easygoing=>an easygoing
be friend=> be a friend

My family has four members,my sister father and mother.
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There are four members in my family, including my sister, father and mother.

The interest is to like to play basketball and chat.
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I am interested in playing basketball and chat.

I hope the university can lived joy and learn a lot.
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I am looking forward to a wonderful and meaningful colleage life.

That's all. Nice to meet you.

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我們老師說要80個字

但是我只能想到這麼多..

請大家幫我看文法對不對

以及要補充什麼

Thanks.
舊 2007-10-14, 01:37 AM #6
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