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加入日期: Aug 2006
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作者dickiong
My name is 名子.
I was born on April 23,1988.
I live in Tainan County.
I have a easygoing personality and I'm very happy to be friend with everyone.
My family has four members,my sister father and mother.
The interest is to like to play basketball and chat.
I hope the university can lived joy and learn a lot.
That's all. Nice to meet you.
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我們老師說要80個字
但是我只能想到這麼多..
請大家幫我看文法對不對
以及要補充什麼
Thanks.


不對喔.是名字不是名子
另外.泰坦的英文是TITAN.不是TAINAN
而且.INTERST是利息的意思.
是SHAT不是CHAT.不信請查雅虎字典.保證你大吃一斤
最後.不要以為我不知道SISTER是妹妹.真像來~~~~~~

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