恩..這星期五要英文演講啦 　時間要１分半鐘到２分
我想請問一下關於英文演講一些需要注意的情形


這裡應該有很多身居外國的朋友吧 可否幫小弟看一下這篇稿子

Hello！Everyone, today I want to talk about a student who failed a grade

One year is a period of very long time

We can do a lot of things at this period of time

Like to take a trip,to learn more new things

But to a student who failed a grade

That stand for he will lost one year to do these things

and stand for he have not managed time properly

“Time is money”

To manage time properly is very important

Time passes very fast

We should fully utilize time

Do some meaningful things

I think the student shoud be very regretful

But…..so what?

The wheel of time is forever in motion

I hope everyone can manage time properly

And all pass

Thank you for your listening

Have a nice day!

小弟的英文破破的 我是用中文寫然後翻 我還用DR。ＥＹＥ。。。
不知有何須改進之處?

還有倒數第2句
是Thank you for your listening
還是Thank you for listening

最後感謝各位大大撥空觀看 謝啦